Nice tale. Wouldn't mind an extension.

Horror is my favorite, I'm so glad you went with it! This is really lovely (which I probably shouldn't feel like it is, but). I love the puns, and I love that, I don't know, the entire story feels *red*. Does that make sense? It feels appropriate, anyway. And I love that Jane wants them to know that she's a woman. I just love everything!

(Sorry for the lateness; my Internet connection's been wack.)

Nice! This story was very well written. I hope you intend to continue this story.