Reviews for The King's Mate I: The Holly and the Ivy
Guest chapter 12 . 6/23/2013
This was an interesting story. I love it when characters are 1)vampires or 2)have special talents and I look forward to reading the next 2 parts. I've been disappointed too many times to get through a good multi-chapter story only to find the author hasn't added to it for a long, long time & never picks it back up to finish. So, I always wait until the final chapter to comment so I don't get too vested in it. Hope you keep writing and entertaining us!
Guest chapter 12 . 6/14/2013
Never read a story like this before, congrats, moving on two the second.
Tiffany chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
Omg lol I love the Mass Effect reference :D
Chronos Ardour chapter 12 . 11/11/2012
ok...I die and nosebleed just now...thank you very much..
Chronos Ardour chapter 8 . 11/11/2012
ok...I hate that doctor...hes being a ...*****...
Chronos Ardour chapter 7 . 11/11/2012
Perfect explaination for the kings personality Simon,and I also cant wait for seeing those two fight
Chronos Ardour chapter 5 . 11/11/2012
Like Father like daughter...jeez Diarmad you just had to show off that youre well arent you?
Chronos Ardour chapter 4 . 11/11/2012
he can walk now!:D aww Tristan and Landyns story is cute
Chronos Ardour chapter 3 . 11/11/2012
ok...I hate that woman...
Chronos Ardour chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
the best first impression to a person is to grab them and strip them naked...
Raaawr Ima Dinosaur chapter 13 . 10/22/2012
This story was soooooo good! THe only thing I disliked was the little slashes you put in the cuss words. In my opinion, if the story is rated M, there's really no need to make the cuss words child friendly... if you know what I mean.

Anyway, this was amazing and I am now about to read part two! Great job! :D
ThatChickMelanie chapter 13 . 8/29/2012
D: Diarmad is dead? wahh)': but i loved reading this! as you can tell by how late it is i obviously could not stop(: at first i thought Diarmad was an old dude and was like :O but then i found out he wasnt nn was like-3-" phew anyways this story was the perfect of humor, drama, and best of all ... imma stop there *wink, wink* lol well anyhoothank you for the amazing read, im definitly favoriting this3
Blo0d StaiNed Rose chapter 12 . 7/14/2012
this story caught me of guard...i was very surprised that i liked it so much, i think it is your fault and your amazing writing...my only criticism is that you let the characters form on their own, but we hardly know how they look in appearance, as a reader for me its important to be able to visualize the characters, (i am not sure if its only me though so dont take it too seriously :p)..your story had flow and your characters depth and i loved how you managed even with the most outrageous excuses to make it somehow work and seem real :):) good job :) now i am off to read the second part :):)
Nevermore23 chapter 12 . 3/20/2012
I loved this story so much! Please don't take long for part 2! This was a really good story and you are an incredible author. I can't wait to see what part 2 brings so please write it a post it! I would hate it if I didn't get to read a second part.
Nevermore23 chapter 11 . 3/16/2012
AH HA! I knew it was going to be Diarmad! I am so glad that they finally mated. I can definitely imagine Diarmad as a black panther, it fits him perfectly. I am so glad that Moira is dead. I hated her! This chapter was amazing as always, I can't wait to see what happens next
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