|Reviews for TRAPPED IN HELL ON EARTH|
| Grimpeddler chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
This sounds like how I will die someday. I'd like for the guy to live. I don't know, he could use the prickliness of the sardonic Cactus to cut the ropes. All I can imagine is him either toppling the Cactus once he's free as revenge, or carrying the Cactus with him. If I could add some criticism, this story is really funny, but it's all a block (I've done that too). It you added in indentation, it would look a lot better, and I think more people would read it.
I really liked it; it made me smile :)