Reviews for Wicked Game
Jon Berkley chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
Man, that's really messed up! Good job!
Rogue Energizer Bunny chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
I went back to see if there were any of your stories that I hadn't review and found this.

There should be a comma in that sentence somewhere. Meh.

Good concept, as usual from you. There needs to be more development of the backstory through details and dialogue, I think. Sometimes you get so focused on the concept and plot that the narrative lacks color and realism. I know this is one of your older things, so no judgement, but y'know. Criticism helps with anything.


walls-have-ears chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
I actually found this slightly funny. Disturbing, but sometimes I like disturbing. Keep writing more like this!
Let's See If It Moves chapter 1 . 3/2/2012 chilling! This guy is even cra-zee-err than I am! Do you know his mobile number? I believe we have certain things in common!

Anyhoo, is this gonna continue? It would be cool if it did!