Reviews for Every Story Has Two Sides
northcountryboy chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
I find that he icecream she eats and her watching the notebook a little too cliche. How about have her eating something suprising, like Swedishfish dipped in Coolwhip as her comfort food and maybe reading The Notebook instead of watching it. Or give the boy more character and instead of him playing Call of Duty, why not have him watch The Notebook or something else. Ofcourse these are just sugestons and you don't have to do what I said, but they are my ideas on what could make it better.