Reviews for That Moment |
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![]() ![]() Brings back happy memories of a giggling daughter in the back of the car when she saw the Cheshire Cat's grin! |
![]() ![]() I do this often x thanks for the reminder |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice. Tragic but terribly beautiful. Keep up the good work (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely. Completely the opposite of the first chapter. First angst, then innocence. Just read it a few more times through. It flows well but not quite as well as your first chapter. But great job (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it. It's so short, yet it captures so much. I really like your concept of capturing short fleeting moments. Great job! I'm reading on (: |