Brings back happy memories of a giggling daughter in the back of the car when she saw the Cheshire Cat's grin!

I do this often x thanks for the reminder

Very nice. Tragic but terribly beautiful. Keep up the good work (:

Lovely. Completely the opposite of the first chapter. First angst, then innocence. Just read it a few more times through. It flows well but not quite as well as your first chapter. But great job (:

I love it. It's so short, yet it captures so much. I really like your concept of capturing short fleeting moments. Great job! I'm reading on (: