Reviews for Remembrance |
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Olivia Grace chapter 17 . 6/17/2013 Ive read and re-read this story, why havent you updated? |
isfuathliomgaeilge chapter 17 . 8/6/2012 Ok I officially love this story! Its amazing! Ur a really good writer! Update soon! :D K xx |
Miley Deloy chapter 17 . 8/6/2012 holy crackers that ending was awesome! you're writing is still good, if a little inaccurate grammar-wise here and there, but still good. your descriptions are as good as ever and i love the way you are adding in the murder. is it casius who killed emmy and dair in their former lives? is the new wife reincarnated as leidon's stepmother? this seems very snow white-like, if that's what you were aiming for (huntsman in the woods and all that). I wanted to punch Metheus when he was being condescending to emmy, so your characterization is growing as your characters themselves do. i hope leidon doesn't die! keep up the good work! -Miley |
Miley Deloy chapter 16 . 5/8/2012 this chapter is so sad. i feel so bad for most of the curia they all have to lose something and they don't even have a choice. i hope the sister comes back, though. |
Miley Deloy chapter 15 . 5/8/2012 that is so sad and romantic! i love it. and finally emmy is remembering more! |
Miley Deloy chapter 14 . 5/8/2012 i love the backstory and golden statues. very beauty-and-the-beast, if that's what you were aiming for. great! |
Miley Deloy chapter 13 . 5/8/2012 OMG i loved when Emmy beat the crap out of Colette! And i really want a shot at Metheus too. he's a real jerk for keeping Colette around. good job! |
Miley Deloy chapter 12 . 4/21/2012 I hate Colette and I really want to kick Metheus in the nuts. But the chapter was great! I love how Leidon is getting a bit kinder towards others. Great job! -Miley Deloy |
Miley Deloy chapter 11 . 4/13/2012 Oh my god, this was such a sad chapter! I feel so bad for Aurelia, Rafan, Emmy - and even Leidon. Wow, never thought I'd admit that. I could really feel the pain here, so raw for all the characters. It was beautifully done. keep up the good work! -Miley Deloy |
Miley Deloy chapter 10 . 3/31/2012 Love this chapter! Things are really getting interesting. I love how Emmy doesn't understand why Alasdair hates Metheus (haha) and that she rejected Alasdair - good for her! I'd hoped she wouldn't just fall into his arms and leave Metheus heartbroken, though that may be what happens. Anyway, thank you for your past reviews and sorry I haven't been on lately. I still have to admit chapter 9 is my favorite so far. -Miley Deloy |
Miley Deloy chapter 9 . 3/16/2012 Ouch! That's really gotta hurt Metheus. I'm kind of rooting for him now. I'm wondering what a praesidium is, but i know it will be good. Leidon gives me the creeps! Keep up the good work Miley Deloy |
Miley Deloy chapter 8 . 3/16/2012 First of all . . . whoa. just epic. I absolutely loved the ending and how Emmy is getting a backbone. Dair seems kind of annoying now, but i'm curious as to why he has to keep Metheus around. Thank you for the acknowledgment in the beginning! Miley Deloy |
Arvael chapter 9 . 3/16/2012 Does she remember now, too? Or not all, but only some things? Andand poor Metheus, but... agh, I'm horrible, but I'm happy that finally the prince and Emmy's relationship moved in a positive way! Hm, and according to what Metheus said to Alasdair... it was right that the secret which killed them before was related to the curia... Hmmm... Thank you for the chapter! Have a nice weekend, full of inspiration! \o/ |
Arvael chapter 8 . 3/13/2012 Whew... wow. This was an intense chapter! Anyway~ it got me thinking - what if the truth Alec and Arin discovered lifetimes before was somehow connected to the Book of Truths? Hmhmm... Ah, dunno. I feel like going around and around and around with my ideas . Great chapter and the end was indeed shocking. Wonder how Emarin's relation to the Blythe family would change. Well, wish you loads of inspiration and thank you for the update! *.* |
Arvael chapter 7 . 3/11/2012 Wow, a chapter dedicated for me? Thank you! 3 I'm very happy You know, ever since Metheus appeared, I couldn't help, but feel suspicious of him... After this chapter, I understand some things, but I'm still not sure about his (and his past self's) intentions... Hmm... guess we'll see. I do hope Emarin will manage to get over this phase and will be able to speak privately with the prince, at last. Maybe on the tour? And I'm glad Aurelia will join them, as well. Maybe we'll see some development with her and Edward? Also, I think Aurelia is Lia... x) And Alec- I mean, the prince should really try to find out more about his past life as Alec. What did they uncover that's so important for the country? I guess it involves some nobles, high in the court... And I'm still rooting for the prince and Emarin to end up together in this life, too :D Also, you might want to read through the chapters once more before posting: there are usually 1 or 2 paragraphs where you mistype these: he/she/her/his. It can get confusing when there is more than 1 characters in a scene and they are of different gender. I just say to please be a lookout on them, because I'm sure it's not intentional on your part :) Thank you for the update and the dedication, again! Have a nice day, full of inspiration! :) |