Reviews for Improbability
Asparagus chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
That was highly amusing. I really liked the Sherlock Holmes bit, and there weren't many obvious spelling or grammatical mistakes. (However, for future reference, "Threw" is the past tense of "Throw" and "Through" is as in "through the doorway".)
Imagination12 chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
I see you finally published this! I'm definitely going to publish mine soon, then. I don't really have many comments on this. If I did, you've probably heard all of them.

Did you mean to write, "Finn Mayhew" at the very end? That was the only thing that threw me off.

I enjoyed the story anyway! Reading it (or hearing it) three times definitely allows you to understand it better.

~i12