Reviews for black coffee
ensconced chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
such vivid imagery. hope you're doing okay.
pulses can drive from here chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
very powerful. i can feel your pain through this poem, and it just makes me want to make you less sad.
electrical moon chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
Good Lord...this is amazing, short and to the point. It really packs a punch.
the-lovely-anomaly chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Sweet Jesus, this is poignant.
savor those enticing dreams chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
sheesh.

brutally honest, and for some reason i just love it. i know, this should be constructive criticism, but i really do like this poem.

if anything, i would change the line breaks, but that's just my own opinion...it doesn't take away from the beauty of this poem.
Midnight voices chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
Your poetry scares me by how accurate it is. It's blunt, and scary.