What a great story! I like your novel and I wanna give you an offer that related to your work. Would you mind give me your email to discuss the details further . .

reading over, the idea is beautiful and interesting, but there is a big problem, the characters change personality and want every two chapters.
The most confused character among all is Evander, a character who is too hard to explain himself.
moreover, in many of the events that cover Evandere Calvin they have ridiculous contradictions, beyond the boundaries of logic.
I really have a (love / hate) for this story, because as I said, it's really a good idea.
the end has not at all encouraged me to read the sequel.

..I am not sure you understand your characters at all.. they act like.. well.. Calvin wants a name and what does he do? ..he whispers a very lewd threat.. then he is scared and horrified sobbing to find about the vampire but you make him gratefully smile?!.. is he nuts? touched by dementia?.. it is like I find myself in three different scenes at the same time from very different movies..

That was a great story, although in the beginning you first said that the difference in height between them was about 3" changed to a foot

I just spent two hours reading this story, but it felt like the blink of an eye! You shot me in the chest over and over again, then you healed me... God, I love what you did with the story, thank you SO MUCH!

Really liked the entire storyline and I love the guys too. Great fiction. If I think of something for a sequel, I'll PM you.

I'm do glad that they ended up together. This is such a great story!

Poor Evander, lucky Evander. His life's pain relived somewhat. I await the final chapter, breathlessly.

The universe thing seems cool. The body switch made me think of Orochimaru from the anime Naruto.

I'm all caught up, and I have to tell you this was a wonderful read. The ups and downs of this story were done so well. I expect the next few chapters to be just as wonderful, thanks for posting this story.

Ooops,

I know it's not funny but the last part made me laugh.

Ho ho, that is one fine mess.

I have a gut feeling Akiya is Evander's future love! Can't wait for the next update :)

Go Marcy!