I have just come across this and only had time to read the first chapter but I am loving it! You do so well in describing the scene, I can almost feel as if I am there. So many more chapters to look forward to!

Rodrigo has been watching them on camera? That gives me the creeps! PLEASE don't let them hurt Dallas and more importantly, don't let them damage Reese any more than they already have. This is great and very suspenseful, but I can't take them getting hurt! Rodrigo needs to die!

I really like this new version of this story. I didn't realize that Rodrigo knew where they were! I just want Reese and Dallas to really talk and start to heal their relationship. Hopefully, before they face Rodrigo. Thanks for the update.

Oooohhhh and a more clear picture of what happened to her.. Please update soon

Dun-dun-dun! Ughhh, I don't want those creepy guys to get Reese. I like the 't wait to read more!

Oohhh this is getting really good can't wait for more please update soon

I really like the changes you have made to this or the original story! I enjoyed it before, but I like this one even better. I hope you will continue to update this one. Very intriguing and not like all of the other ones out there.

I like the way your writing this story. Going back forth with the present and what happen in really enjoying myself with this story please update soon