Reviews for Ring, ring
Dancinglo627 chapter 1 . 10/6/2017
Yelp, looks like Rita finally lost her mind in the end. And Rita talking about sex to Jack's nephew, Prince Charming is gay (Poor Cinderella XD), how ancient monks made Jack change his whole story, ahhhh I just laughed my ass off at everything XD Probably the most funniest story I've read on fictionpress. Jack is whole lot like me...doing everything BUT writing...
Ishotthealbatross chapter 1 . 1/12/2015
That was hilarious, especially the ending XD
morningstorm70 chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
Haha I love it
It reminds me of the fruits basket anime where the lady comes to the house looking for the manuscript but he keeps putting her off. But in this she gets the better of him. LOL
Krimsyn chapter 1 . 1/8/2014
I like it :) I really liked the idea of picking up a gay Prince Charming at Disneyland :P
Guest chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
That woman is a true dragon lady, I mean... can't a writer just, ya' know, write when the feeling hits them? And I mean hit them hard like, Hulk punching Thor through the wall of Shield HQ hard.
Pygmy owl chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
This is hilarious!
ImmanenceEnsured chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Wow, this is awesome! Rita is the awesomest agent ever. I love it how she nearly goes crazy, then GOES crazy, and then nothing:) Love it, absolutely.
Cira chapter 1 . 2/29/2012


Wait, was that a warning? Where's my reader? Is the internet still working? *eyes door*

Sorry, no "well rounded critique", like fiction press told me to write. Just, I enjoyed that, a lot, and am still grinning. Oh, and Prince Charming is gay? Anyone told those Princessess? No?