Reviews for Time's Up
freddyburn chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
An interesting take on the zombie tale. I like how you didn't fall back on the tried and tested way of characterising zombies, you know, describing them a shuffeling corpses with rotten flesh- you added more to the description, and it made for good reading. Just a few little things:

1) "Now it's time to pay the price." Should it be "face the consequences" or "pay the piper?"

2) "I tossed the shotgun aside, letting it skidder across the cemented floor." Should that just be "cement floor?"