Reviews for Lost
Mariko Kotesu chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
Brilliant, the similes work fine and the lining works okay, the line T'm I understand you were probably saying I'm but the key messed up or you were so into it that you didn't even notice it. I'm in love with your poetry right now, just saying.
Youji Zero chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
it should say i'm lost in the darkness not t'm lost in the darkness
Vampchick2010 chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
this suits life itself at times. i think we all get a little lost sometimes.