Reviews for Karma
Kblade chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
It was kinda hard to tell who was talking and doing what actions. If you capitalize the names it would be easier.

Other than that it was fabulous
SciFiWizard chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
OK this was good.

A few notes.

1. Center everything, it makes it easier to read. Email me the doc, I'll do that for you.

2. Capitalize the person speaking, for instance have it be:


Turn it off

3. Although Noah is both a female and male name, it is more commonly thought of as male. Any reasons for such a masculine name?

4. Other than that, really, really good!