|Reviews for Karma|
| Kblade chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
It was kinda hard to tell who was talking and doing what actions. If you capitalize the names it would be easier.
Other than that it was fabulous
| SciFiWizard chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
OK this was good.
A few notes.
1. Center everything, it makes it easier to read. Email me the doc, I'll do that for you.
2. Capitalize the person speaking, for instance have it be:
Turn it off
3. Although Noah is both a female and male name, it is more commonly thought of as male. Any reasons for such a masculine name?
4. Other than that, really, really good!