Reviews for Love
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
The meaning of this was great! The word really is flung around way too much. I've definitely had this kind of conversation with people and you really hit it on the head with the line "look at the whole picture" as well as the descriptions and connections you make at the end.

A lot of this wording was very bulky, though. The images were great, but you often used more words than you needed to such as "No, I do not want you for my own, and I have no decent opinion of her."

Still, I find the narrator really interesting. She makes it clear that she isn't jealous and doesn't want this guy, so why is she so intent to disprove his "love" for this girl?

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
SargentLooneyPencil chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
wow... this is amazing.. very true!.. loved every word of it!