|Reviews for Ribbons|
| Hedonistic Opportunist chapter 1 . 9/23/2014
You have a very vivid way of writing - I like that you bleed colour into your prose and that there's an evident affectionate tone in your dialgoue that really makes this piece even creepy. What I mean is that I like how the tender writing and dialogue really offsets the themes of murder and corpse hoarding.
You describe details well too, giving the reader a very keen idea of what's going on - especially in terms of character appearances and the background setting. I think this really helps create an atmosphere. I also like how you build this up, slowly and steadily, with the man's creepy dialogue hinting at what's to come, but still not making it all the less shock when it's all revealed.
There are a few tiny errors here and there, but it's nothing a quick re-read or a good beta wouldn't catch :)
| SugarRayne chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
Okay that was extremely creepy and disturbing. I think I like it. :3