Why would Lady Gaga... nevermind. At least Duff found a good way to repel zombies... THRILLER!

I really like how I immediately feel as though I'm getting to know your main character. She's relatable and I enjoy that a lot. There's a lot of really fun, random humor in this and that appeals to me. A first-person narrative is always a fun read. I think this is great and I'm looking forward to continuing to read this story!

[And I know that better than anyone else, because [] was the cook of three guys. The trio of destruction, the triforce, Godzilla.] I think you forgot and "I".

[When I asked April about it, she told me Butch had eaten them.] I hope she wasn't forreals. Hotel beds are like...the most disgusting things ever.

[None of those guys had been smart enough to bring a weapon,] Common sense would dictate the first thing you do in this situation is...ARM YOURSELF TO THE TEETH LAWL. xD

This chapter is pretty funny, but I have mixed feelings about it. For a zombie apocalypse, the main character seemed to be enjoying herself a bit too much. I can understand it if time passed by but this thing just started and she's already running around instead of being terrified out of her wits. The lists are also pretty random LOL. Like I said before, there should be a line drawn between horror and humor too much of both in this type of genre.

Other than that, I'd say this is a pretty solid chapter. I wonder how her group is gonna turn out. Just one thing:

[Only time would say.] This kinda bothers me. Shouldn't be only time would tell? xD

Escribi mas!

Collin esta increible! Y siii pusiste a Pain! Pero no le hiciste pelo de fuego como te dije -.-

Yo se quien va a narrar el otro capitulo! Lucas! Que hijo de chucha.

Jaja, que como se donde subis esto? Quien te manda a dejar esto abierto en mi iPhone?

La parte donde se pelean por pizza es increible. Que pedo con Lucas? Yo le rompo los dientes xD

Abril me cae bien porque es la pacifista del grupo. Y la menos rara aunque prendio el hotel en llamas sin razon.

Le tenes que eseñar esto a todos mañana!

Que matado de risa esta esto! Me lo hubieras enseñado hoy en la mañana para que lo leyera Clara, ya sabes por que.

Lyon Kennedy? Resident Evil!

Matado de risa. Definitivamente. Me acabo de fijar que Duff es igualita a la novia de aquel maje.

OMG i love that quote! Now when my mum asks me to do anything, ill just say i was born to die and sit there in front of the telly!
DUFF YOU LIKE PONIES TOO OMG OmO Now i know what i COULD have gotten you for your 16th bday!

Aw man no hot guys ( I hate it when people bug me when im in the toilet! xD

Just found myself liking your story. Nice references, and the characters are hilarious.

*sigh* If only there was a plot...

So I found this random to the extreme. I don't know what Michael Jackson or JuBi have to do with this. Nevertheless, it was a fun read and I'm eager to continue.

I do like the references to random celebrities and people, but at times it gets a little confusing. Maybe it's cause, as I said, I don't know all of the people you mentioned, but sometimes I come across a random name and I'm like wha? is that a newly introduced character or some paragraph that I missed that was supposed to introduce this person?
Also, have you heard of the 'Shakespeare law' as my English teacher calls it? Shakespeare was really revolutionary, in his tragedies like Romeo and Juliet. Before, plays and stories in the tragedy genre was all like tragedy tragedy tragedy all the way through. The audience kind of got bored of it, cause they could kind of guess something bad was going to happen soon. But Shakespeare put comedy before the tragedy, so that the audience could really love and relate to the characters, and actually feel sad and empty when they died or something bad happened to them. I think it would be great if you put this into your story; just a chapter with no references or funny jokes, just a serious and intense one that moves along the plot. Although I do understand comedy and light-heartedness is a major element that makes your story unique, so it's up to you (: Just a suggestion
And haha, this is a reallyyy long review XD Soz.

["TAYLOR SWIFT IS SEXY."] Yush she is, I love her and her songs :D Although a lot of people hate her lately, especially harry styles fans '
And yahh, you update really slow ): Which is great, in a way, because that makes your stories better. But also bad, in a way, cause it means that I have to wait for longer for an update. And I tend to have a most horrible memory, and I'll have to go back and reread some bits to remember what happened. Also, how do you keep yourself from writing this story? XD I find it hard to stop writing when I'm into it, especially because I don't plan a lot for my stories. I just go along with the flow and it's like I myself am a reader too. So I don't get how you could ever stop writing a story as good and interesting as this for three months! X)

[My eyebrow twitched in frustration.] This happens to me when I'm secretly annoyed at someone or something, it's like a subconscious reaction. It's bad, because then my friends and the people who know me well can tell immediately.
Pizza XD

[ Everyone was silent for a second, so we heard when someone farted.] When I read this sentence before, I was literally laughing out loud in front of my computer. That was when I was alone. Now, I was reading through your story for a second time to pick up stuff I missed and good points for review, and I laughed out loud. Again. But this time my mum was outside my room, and she had to come in and ask if I was okay.
[AND STOP THROWING YOUR BOOGERS AT ME."] My brother flicks his boogers at me. It's not pleasant, but amusing nonetheless.