Poor Duff. Wait, Molotov cocktails? Interesting...
-Raven

Stay away from Butch's mouth.
*shudders*
*raises hands*
*backs away*
I don't...even want to know...how...
-Raven

Laughed at the DBZ and Certain Magical Index references and the cat's dirty mouth. And wow, Bieber really is a character in here? That's an interesting touch! And I feel so sorry for Duff Obama...
This randomly reminded me of this time my friend and I were considering the ethics of naming a child after an anime character (she wanted to but I did not) then agreed it would be slightly disenchanting to meet ol' Sasuke Smith and Orochimaru Johnson at the joint. Then we found a reddit thing where this guy wanted to give his son the middle name Goku and asked people for a first name. My answer? SON. CALL HIM SON GOKU.
I've gotten off topic, but that's probably because this story has a lot of energy to respond back to. Good work!
-Raven

Wow...
This is pretty good. I mean, usually I'm not for zombie apocalypse stuff, but you understand the rule of drama "Less is more" and this feels very refreshing. I can almost see the protagonist escaping a warehouse being chased by zombie Justin Bieber singing the national anthem or If I Die Young.
I laughed randomly inside at the mention of zombies being rappers and the screams of horror at Fifty Shades of Grey...all of a sudden I pictured the earth being populated by Iggy Azalea zombies for some reason?
Keep up the good work!
-Raven

This is a very fun story to read, i enjoy the humor and MC is cool, also i like how you ended with that message from her mum, awesome story so far. Well, i'm off to the next chapter.

First love the hate on twilight (vampires don't spark they burst into flames!) Tip 1 on the other-hand has me callin' bullshit. Never look a melee weapon in the mouth, if it allows you to stab through one :)
Anyways, well done and thanks for sharing

I like your story (duh)! Although it has a dark tone to it, Duff's commentary creates humor and lightens up the mood, the comedy is great and the characters are interesting. You're an awesome writer!

wut hapens nxt?

This is a fun story. I found the main character's commentary to be hilarious, though what a situation that they find themselves in! To think that her entire family and most likely the rest of the town was turned into zombies would be something that would break a person, though it seems like she's taking everything in stride. Haha. It all had to happen on her sweet sixteenth birthday, too. I'm curious how the outbreak started, but I'm mostly drawn into the story about the character herself. I laughed at the Twilight remark and the Justin Bieber comment. Those were too good xD

Since I can't Pm I'll just spam your review box. First thank you for your review I really do appreciate it. To answer your comment, yes she is suppose to be that way. And I can't tell you exactly why but I think it is a good thing because it leaves room for character development, also it's based on a dream I had (just a fun fact) I hope you continue to read and help me throughout the story. I haven't written in years

This story is nothing short of amazing.

hey nice story girl/boy ;D you should continue doing this, your storys are amazing, maybe you will become a famoues writter some day, you have the potential.

I will not get all deep and sappy, but just know this. I LOVE IT. Freaking Hilarious. I laughed even when there were few things that I didn't even understand. OMG- I love Duff. I think she might just beat my little sister in a randomness-comedian contest...Maybe...

The Justin Bieber reference was a comedic twist for me. Agreeably I would have to guess that person was a Justin fan but let's not get into that. Agreeably I see this story as trying to be cool and comedic at the same time. Not sure what it wants to be.

Pencil, it's a hard life out there and when it gets worst, the pencil is indeed mightlier than the sword. I can say I enoyed this chapter and I looked forward with what the next chapter has in turn.

But on a another humor, hahahahaha, best part, the inclusion of Justin Beiber. I just hope he doesn't get eatten soon. I love you Justin! ;3 (fan-girl out)

And what a nice way to end this chapter with that small writing. Moms always knows best and love your mommy.