|Reviews for The Day of the Dead|
| RaisingDad chapter 1 . 1/10
I wrote one zombie story (Zombie Ghadaffi) and I began it with: "When Hell is full, the dead will walk the Earth." But it never occurred to write it in verse. I bow to your brilliance.
| ImmanenceEnsured chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
It's awesome x) gosh, your zombie apocalypse is DARK! Which isn't too surprising, but this actually made me feel a bit sad instead of zombie-excited.
| Corgisfield chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
Um, okay then. Very gory, but the rhythm was enjoyable (I do so love rhymes). I have never read a poem about zombies before, but this was interesting. You do know the Day of the Dead, or la Día de Los Muertos, is a Mexican holiday, right? I'm not putting you down or anything, I'm just saying. Good poem in all, it was entertaining and that's what matters, right? Hope to see some more poems like this (maybe less violent)! Good job! :)
| J.M. Black chapter 1 . 2/27/2014
It's short, to the point, and very well written.
I'm not one for poetry, but I am one for zombies, and I really like what you did here.
| Cookie Maker chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
Woah you can write stories and poems Who are you
| The lone canine chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
I really, really like this piece. It's well written, the descriptions are quite good and, I must say, sent some shivers down my spine and overall it is great. Awesome work here!
| xxxyx chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
Some of the syllables sounded a little bit awkward, but, meh. Who cares? It has zombies.
And that 'all rights reserved' at the end. :P Was a nice touch.
Ps. 25 reviews for 93 words... that's 4 words per review!
| Buttersmash chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
I reviewd. No sue me mwahaha
| daughter of Athena and Apollo chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
Lol, cool idea. Nice poem. I love the word 'splices'.
| HenryDavid chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
| Revamp chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
This was a very good poem. I like how this poem in particular tells a story of sorts. and your rhyme scheme is wonderful. I hope to see more poems from you.
| Naver chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
That was funny and slightly creepy cool all the same. Continue to write. :)
Random note: You knew I couldn't resist a don't review.. sorry"
| MagicWords chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
I love zombies! This was epic!
| PoisonedElysium chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
Both amusing and chilling, I'm giggling and checking out the window for zombies! (By-the-by, the 'All rights reserved' isn't part of the poem but making a claim to it?) But seriously it's a lovely poem, only maybe it could read 'corpses' to put it in the plural? :)
| rust phoenix chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
I like the imagery you use in the poem. I could see it really clearly in my mind.