Reviews for Hey, love is love
Allein chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
I like this one better. It was still a little rocky in some places, but it's improvement. I like her new name and you subtly showed her shallowness rather than shoved it in our faces. Haha, in other words, I'm not annoyed by her this time.

Hmm, a scar on the jaw? I wonder how she got that. One thing you should fix is this setence:

"...nodded in satisfaction, grabbed his bag and made her way down the huge staircase..."

I didn't use the full sentence, but you used "his" instead of "her".