Reviews for Your Only One
ConverseAllStar chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
So, I will warn you now that I do very often criticize, sometimes wrongfully, and it is completely and solely MY opinion

I really liked that poem;) goodword choices, and the way you wrote it felt almost disconnected, but at the same time connected, exactly like thoughts, really good job with that. The fourth line, though following suit and staying disconnected, was almost halting in it's length. I kind of had to go back and read it a second time to really grasp what you were saying. You probably meant it to be that way, and if u take issue with this review, just reread the disclaimer at the top;)