Reviews for Ride On
Feral Princess of the Prairie chapter 2 . 8/7/2012
I'm sorry but i have to say that (and only because I was raised in the PRCA and by pro bareback riders and I am a second generation rodeo Cowgirl) this is not realistic. its good tho so im not saying that you shuld stop it just is not realistic. you cant run a 11 second time in a normal sized rodeo arena they dont even do that at the WNRF the arena record at the thomas and mack center (WNFR arena) is a 13.4 and that was set by Sherry Cervi on her horse Stingray. also she would not b going into the holding pens with that bull she does not own him nor would she be alowd back there around the bucking stock it would be the stock contractor and his pickup me and rest of the people who work for him back there and they never would have left the horse. lik i said it is unrealistic and it was bothering me only because i am a Rodeo contestent and was raised with these people and i am friends with rodeo companies and profesinal rodeo cowboys
Rodeo Angel chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
I dont know if you know but at rodeos they wont call out and the next event is ... there is a sheet in the bird house (anoucers booth) that tells you the order of events and barrels unless there is two sets of bulls is always the event before bulls. just thought I'd let you know how it is
m.mahone chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
great story i really love it i barrel race also i love it so much!
ILoveWritingBooks chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
I think the next chapter or book about this should be about Jessie Jamey trying to survive in the real world without family or friends. And also you should re-read your book before you publish because I saw a couple of mistakes. And I think maybe you could make it more interesting by using some adjectives and describing the where it takes place. But, other than that it was pretty good, it kept my attention. :) God Bless and Write On!