Reviews for East Renton at night w airplanes overhead
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
"is bad for ones heath."... one's

I like the piece. It creates a really interesting character. The beginning is great because it sets a whole scene with the girl in it and you describe the sight, sound and taste. Nice job!

I also like the ending because it was kinda funny and it also shows more about who she is. It's also an interesting comparison to the line before it about love being bad for one's health.

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Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
Well I know it's been a while, but here I am with 2 new pieces, so I thought I would would once again check in on one of my favourite authors on here. I was not dissapointed.

This short piece was as ever easily up to the standard of your other works and Indeed I could picture and understand the emotion and sense of the work.

Beautifully done as ever FJ.

Fabian Cortez