Reviews for Starlit Ballet
Kilden chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
Wow! You have such a way with words. I really enjoy reading your works. This one really spoke to me because I suffer from insomnia at times and lie awake at night. When I read the line "a strip of the violin's...of mortality." I... I have no words for how beautiful that was. I have no problems with your writing. Your punctuation is perfect to what I can tell. Along with spelling, grammar, and the flow of your words is impeccable! The only word was elfin. I think you were going for Elvin creature. I really would like to read more of your stories. Keep them coming!