Reviews for Addiction
quasys chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
my reaction for when my mom is mad and is holding a frying pan. well, not the "fucking beautiful" part. that would be creepy. but thats a really cool poem: it really let's you see emotions and stuff *does cool hand motions*
ConverseAllStar chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
It is a good poem, and I liked it's meaning and how it has your personality in it. I know you were trying to show strong emotion, but in a poem about feelings, i don't think that Fu**ing was completely neccesary. I am not a huge freak about language because I AM a teenager and therefore I am surrounded by it ALL THE TIME, but in a poem, it is really unsophisticated. My personal opinion.