Reviews for Pickup Lines Don't Work As Well As Tetris Battles |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was the absolute cutests! So Adorable :D I loved how socially awkward Lucas was and that Phillip still liked him! Brilliant story, thanks for writing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the cutest thing ever! I Just started on this site, and this is only like the 4th story I have read. So far so good. Seriously how do you not have more reviews. This is going on my favorites list. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god, how cute is Lucas? He really is social inept isn't he? Sounds like he's found his social protector though. I enjoyed this very much. I think it could have been plumped out a bit more with a little more description but it is very entertaining, especially the baseball cage thing. I think I might have laughed out loud more than once, poor Lucas. Is this it for these two or are you going to write more? One shots of Lucas being guided through a socially confusing life by Phillip would be very welcome. Thanks for sharing this, DS |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was adorable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Couldn't finish this story... not because its bad, but all I kept thinkin was, "Passed out for 3 hours? That kid has is either dead or has severe brain damage! Why wasn't he immediately taken to the hospital!" There is no way he just woke up and had sex... I know it seems like a little thing, but your story seems to rely on that as a turning point... whereas being unconscious for more than 5 mins warrants immediately calling an ambulance. I know I sound like a nit-picky bitch, but please just check your facts next time, it made me unable to read the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well. That was certainly adorable. I really liked it! Great one-shot:) Keep writing, Caseus! -Chester |