This is a lovely piece, and something that speaks to me in my time of great need. I do feel like giving up and looking back to the life I once had, and this confirms that I must stay strong, though I know not how. Anyway, great great poem with smooth flow, and thank you for your PM, it was much needed, wow, it was providence!

I like the poem generally but I feel that the 2nd half of it is weaker than the first half. In the first half, the poem flows very well and sounds rhythmical while the 2nd half sounds a bit more strained and less natural. Overall though, it's a good poem, nice work!