Reviews for What to Do About Ethan
Guest chapter 5 . 7/15/2013
Its good but you drag on J.D's thoughts way too much and the reader starts loosing interest in the story.
R. Ficst chapter 3 . 10/21/2012
Just a comment for now,
I've noticed you used the phrase "burning the midnight oil" several times already and you're only in the third chapter. A phrase like that can be used a couple of times maybe, but the repetition becomes obvious and unoriginal very quickly. Swap it out with something different a few times, and your writing will definitely improve.
xDangerousLovex chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
I'm so excited to see where this story goes. I also can wit go check out some of your other stories!
xNightDx chapter 26 . 3/13/2012
It was so epic!

Crazy writer, Jazz lol.

Update soon!~
ellakb chapter 23 . 3/10/2012
I read this all the way through before commenting. I really like the story. I'm nervous about who the bad guys are and if Ethan or J.D will get caught in the fray. Great job!
xNightDx chapter 2 . 3/10/2012
I loved every word! If this comes out as a novel, I'll buy it! Your stories are amazing! Shame on those who don't review these great stories.

Keep up the good work!~

LunarRaven13 chapter 19 . 3/6/2012
Just so you know, I blame you for not doing any homework at all for the past two days. But honestly, I love the story. I can't wait to see what happens next! I did notice one thing though, when you changed Ethan's name from Matt you changed all the 'matters' to 'Ethaners' I was very confused until I figured it out.
LunarRaven13 chapter 4 . 3/4/2012
I loved What to Do About Max and when I saw this I was super excited! I can't wait to see where this story goes!