|Reviews for The Origin of the Phoenix|
| ChildCalledSilence chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
Alright man, you need to read my fiction called "The Birth of Seven" on my page. We have to be on the same wavelength or something.
This poem was awesome. It had great pace and I loved the rhyme scheme. I felt like I was listening to a battle song told by a bard or something. Seriously as I was reading it my head started bouncing with the rhythm.
Seriously why have I not heard of you before? You are amazing.
| Jocelyn Hillcrest chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Wow. I hope you're as proud of this one as I am jealous of it! You stuck to the rhythm and rhyme scheme throughout, and the story was thoroughly told without being flayed. The only issue that I have is that there's no music track to accompany it :)
Keep it up!
| J.M. Black chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Catching on to the easy, and flowing, rhyme scheme early, I knew this was going to be a good story. I love the use of the Phoenix and the girl. This reminds me of Beowulf or some medieval story. Well done.