Reviews for A Different Life
FoundtheLostHero chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Great poem, I love the entire concept! The only thing that you should maybe focus on is writing a little bit more smoothly. This poem could quite easily be perfected if it was a tiny bit less choppy. Just focus on the flow of your writing, and you're set! O)
MichaelDinunzio chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
Very insiteful, loved it,