|Reviews for sally by the sea|
| arrhythmias chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
the rhythm to this is beautiful.
| savor those enticing dreams chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
this has a lyrical sound to it, almost like it should be in a song. i like how simple it is- there is so much to the situation you have described in a hundred or so words, and yet you've captured the long and short of it all in a little poem. i really enjoyed the imagery, particularly concerning the sea.
i'm interested to see what else you've written.