Reviews for The Divinity Game
Jacki Thompson chapter 22 . 11/23/2012
Wow! This was very interesting! Please keep it up!
spark of reality chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
this is awesome! plz update!
Guest chapter 22 . 9/1/2012
this story is so good and you are a really good writer! please update soon!
CanYouHearTheVoices chapter 22 . 7/6/2012
This is a really good story so far. I like the wide variety of characters and personalities, but there are a couple common recurring grammar errors that I've seen. Just some basic "your" instead of "you're" and "then" where it should be "than". I'd reccomend just reading over the chapter once or twice before you post it, or maybe have a friend read over it and point out mistakes. Hopefully this advice helps, and I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter! :)
Chola13 chapter 22 . 7/3/2012
This has made me laugh throughout, I love the fact that Juliet threw them across the room, i was in hysterics reading it. I don't like Lloyd, but that is because i think he is sneaky, but then again every story needs one of those characters. update soon please!
Ditto123 chapter 22 . 6/30/2012
Oh, wow. Juliet sure is strong. Lol :) So ... wonder what's gunna happen now. Btw, this is your longest chapter so far, right?
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 22 . 6/30/2012
Amazing chapter! I love how they're longer now! This should turn out interesting...
Keep up the great work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
Ditto123 chapter 21 . 6/20/2012
At first I found Martin Mills to be annoying. But now ... not so much. Albeit I do hope that he doesn't over use his divinity. No good can ever come to that.

So I'm guessing that we'll be seeing Nathan more or that we'll be meeting more divinity users?

I was sad when Nina died, we didn't read much about her.
Ditto123 chapter 20 . 6/20/2012
Gotta say, I love all the powers in this story! But what happened to Kaiya?
Chola13 chapter 21 . 6/17/2012
I knew he wouldnt die, but that didnt mean i wasnt worried. Please update soon, i really want to know what happens next, and even though Martin is a bit of a nuisance, i like him lol xx
Chola13 chapter 20 . 6/17/2012
Ahhh, no wonder she is such a good reporter. Sorry i havent reviewed in a while i have been busy. Anyway i enjoyed this chapter, the action in it was great!
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 21 . 6/17/2012
Great chapter! There were a few mistakes I noticed, but it was really good. The games have claimed the life of a second player...

I like the scene at the end there too.

Keep up the great work! :) :) :)

Tarah xXx
tea and roses chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Holy shit. I saw a manga on that's called "13 Game". It's a game where people who died and want to come back alive must participate in a game where they are granted someone who has a supernatural power. They have to ise those powers to destroy each oher. Ring a bell, Anyone?
Zak1403 chapter 19 . 6/11/2012
Where did chapter 20 go? I was looking forward to reading it.
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 20 . 6/9/2012
great chapter! This will definitly get interesting...

Keep up the great work!

Tarah xXx
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