Reviews for The Divinity Game
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 16 . 4/14/2012
great chapter!

Why do I have a feeling that something is going to go wrong?

Tarah xXx
Chola13 chapter 15 . 4/13/2012
Didnt see that one coming and i seem to like Llyod lol x the deleted scene was hilarious i had to laugh x please update soon x
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 15 . 4/11/2012
Amazing story so far! Let's see... I took some notes but i think I lost them...

...right... Anyways, I think some of your paragraphs are broken in the rong places. Everyone who's story I read has that problem, but it only takes away from the story a little.

I also was reading your reviews, and I have to agree with them when they say that you should read over your chapters before you post them. I learned that the hard way...

Also, there were afew places when you used the present tense in one paragraph and the past in another. Again, it only takes away from the story a little, but I can still get the main idea of what's going on in the story with no problems.

I really like how you introduced one character at a time. I get really confused when I have a list of people with their character descriptions and I'm just wondering who's doing what. It really helps to understand what's going on in the story.

Amazing story so far!

I'll be patiently waiting for an update...

*taps foot* What's taking so long? sheesh! LOL

Tarah xXx
Ditto123 chapter 15 . 4/10/2012
Oh, so Stephan's asking Rita to the homecoming dance :) and yay Kaiya showed up again even if it was just for the deleted scenes
Writing In Ink Forever chapter 15 . 4/10/2012
The endings always make me laugh.

This was interesting. Faust actually tried to help Rita this time. Even if he is bad at helping. Stephen is such an amazing character! I LOVE him more then the sports brother. :P

Bran at the end with Kaiya, lmao. Kaiya is a strong girl. XD

-Ink
Ditto123 chapter 14 . 4/8/2012
LOL, I like what happened to Faust at the ending. How do the other student council kids know about the Divinity Game? Are they also Divinity users? There were a couple of grammer errors and you might want to double check your chapters before, just in case. But other than that, it's great!
Chola13 chapter 14 . 4/8/2012
Ohhh I wanted to know what is up with Lloyd! Update soon please x
invisible0kid chapter 11 . 4/5/2012
"Ah, and here's the man of the hour himself." Bran said with a grin. "Rita, this is Stephan. He may look like seem like a smart ass and a know-it all, but he's actually a smart ass and a know-it-all."

Stephan smirked. "I see you met Bran. Don't worry, he may seem like an asshole at first, but after you get to know him, it turns out he's still an asshole."

- hehe fav. line! nice.
invisible0kid chapter 13 . 4/4/2012
I love your story! Keep writing! I cant wait for the next chapter! XD
Zak1403 chapter 13 . 4/4/2012
Awesome chapter! Seems like the story will get more intense from here on out XD
Ditto123 chapter 13 . 4/4/2012
Stephan's dad pisses me off and Rita seems happy now that she isn't in Faust's show.
Chola13 chapter 13 . 4/4/2012
this chapter had it all, humour and drama, i dont like their father thought... i like Stephan more lol. There are a few probelms with spelling and gramma but nothing major, update soon xxx
Writing In Ink Forever chapter 13 . 4/4/2012
AMAZING! It reminds me of the Hunger Games, but has enough twists to call it your own. It's humorous. I loved this.

Update soon!

-Elf
Chola13 chapter 12 . 4/3/2012
i was glad Rita showed up and saved them, for some reason i wanted her too x please update and i loved the latest episode by the way xx
Zak1403 chapter 12 . 4/2/2012
It's great that Rita finally figured out her Divinity!

Guess we haven't seen the last of Nate XD

Hope there's some death in the next chapters coming!

Can't wait!
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