|Reviews for Let The War Begin|
| SadEyedLady chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
Hmmm not bad. The plot is a little cliche, but I think you can work with it. Your main character is cute, and I enjoy her spunky tone. However, I think you need a beta reader. The mistakes are not too major (trust me, I would tell you. If it was really that bad I'd be posting a much more scathing anonymous review. I hate too many mistakes.) Still, beta. Just to fix stuff like this: It's "bain" of my existence, not "vain" of my existence. If you want, I'd be up for it. I've never done it for online writing before, but I am an editor for the school newspaper, so I know how to edit.