|Reviews for Anomaly War|
| Darth Zannacross chapter 13 . 9/7
So, a bit delayed but, revelation time. This harsh testing, reminds me of many of the super soldier programs in anime like 00 Gundam, once more the tragicness rings me to the harsh growth of Allelujah Haptism from the super soldier program in that. Still, even Leah seems to know that Leena is not really to blame and is being driven by hate, quite the trend I suppose lol.
Well, the Gods are getting even more anxious and things seem like they are about to blow up, Lee seems to be on the spot.
But speaking of things blowing up, Xion nearly becoming the Thing and putting Axel in to such a bind that he had to let his dark half out seems like a bad omen, if he wins the battle and loses the war its a hallow victory to say the least.
Meanwhile, Shaendru is quite the resourceful baddie, I wonder if Sophe's fiery wrath is enough to truly do him in or he is waiting to transform yet again, or if her own darkness will end up consuming her.
Speaking of darkness, nearly sounds like the Lord of Darkness is rounding up some serious trouble, using Tammy to strike the one weakness of the leader of gods dose sound quite dastardly, guess we will see the truth to this soon enough but does seem quite tense, double so if Jeska is a traitor, she was a enemy to Seth before, but maybe she was working with the true bad guys? Guess we will see.
Speaking of finding out the truth, Leah is piling on the mind games, and, is quite a contrast, is she being a double agent Revolver Ocelot style? Well, whatever she really is, she is clearly brutal, but, since the story is over something tells me Leena is not dead, unless, they have to find the Dragon Balls to revive her lol.
Well we will see, another great tense chapter, and, oh yes, I noticed I suddenly got around 30 views from Canada, was that you looking at my story? Lol, could be just a bunch of random readers from Canada, just curious but in any case till next time keep up the great work.
| Darth Zannacross chapter 12 . 9/7
So, vintage flashback time, see how Sarge became sarge lol. Also, ironic how Quinton's grown since he seems to be indeed worthy of having powers, maybe it was not by choice though, lol.
Oh Collen, how ironic things look at the start, how deceptively innocent.
Well, back in the present, Ace shows even more Team Rocket mannerisms lol. And lol nice Mario nod by Ash.
Well, Shendru is quite the oily snake but, seemed he ticked of Yoshido enough to bring forth her wrath, guess we will see if his creative talents can withstand Hades.
Axel seems to be doing ok but Xion seems to be ready to show his nasty side.
Glad to see Gaff back in action, see he is not rusty, but wither or not it will be enough to take down this Deadshot fanboy is up in the air.
Lol, I remember when bringing out the souls was a rare thing , now they are nearly as common as Pokemon, much more powerful Pokemon at least.
Still, Sargent is doing ok in the face of Adrianne's fury, her own summon, reminds me of that one broken Yata card back in Yu Gi Oh lol, meanwhile, Ace losing to Quinton would really drag him down like how no one takes Bowser seriously after losing to Peach and Toad lol. Still, Yin and Yag, nice, I wonder if they will merge in to a fusion monster? Close enough, and nice part with the Dragon Punch, Ryu would be pleased.
So, Valor is helping give Phalanx some extreme humbling, we will see if its enough or if it will just cause the cyborg to go in to overdrive.
Well, another intense chapter overflowing with tense fights so keep up the great work and till next time.
| Darth Zannacross chapter 11 . 9/5
Well, Matt's actions have caused serious cracks between the Gods, like you could just chug a pebble and it would collapse in to a chaotic battle royal, oy, being under god lockdown won't ease much, arg. Both the lords of Light and Darkness seem to be up to something.
Well, more insight in to the nightmare horror shows killings of the past, Gaff seems to be the man with the answers, and the answer is that Leena is innocent? Leah seems to disagree, and we got another battle royal ready to explode, with another sure to be Ace thrashing as the cherry on top!
Well, time to see what the real deal is, at least the deal told be disgruntled Leah. Well, things are shaping up, keep up the great work and till next time.
| Darth Zannacross chapter 10 . 9/4
Well, Matt seems twisted with hate indeed, even more then most of the other antagonists introduced so far in this, and that's saying a lot. His power to absorb other powers is nearly like Rouge, without the touching part, only he is much more willing to embrace his power it seems.
His power put Mia in a bind though, being dog piled by five enemies is quite the challenge unless your Goku or Naruto or Ichigo or one of those main leads lol, Mia did her best but the odds were not in her favor, backed in to a corner she had to unleash her full power, which seems to be like letting the Nine Tailed Fox out before Naruto came to terms with it, good thing Ryan, er, Pervy god, ahem, Vaylor had that failsafe spell to save Mia from another bad end, though Matt and co got out so, damn.
Well, Leena is rightly ticked off but at least her father is trying to fill her in on things, so she is the rightful heir to Excalibur? Hope its not as moody as the one from Soul Eater lol.
Still, I wonder why Ace was sent to Matt and co, to be a mole? We will see I guess, Matt is plotting something rather explosive it seems, this can't end well.
Also, glad Ash and Sophie had a bonding moment, glad she is getting less hostile, hopefully she will stay that way.
Well, another epic chapter, things are escalating more and more each chapter, looking forward to see what Matt has in store for everyone so keep up the great work and till next time.
| Darth Zannacross chapter 9 . 9/3
So Sophie is not quite a traitor yet? Guess we will see, wicked move she pulled. Also glad to see Seargent's new moves, he moved up a few levels in coolness lol.
At least Leena is doing better with her rematch with Leah, and, got a badass new summon as well,giant rhino with explosives, should have been a upgrade in one of the Donkey Kong games lol.
Well, it plowed through Leah but, Phalanx seems like quite a tougher target.
Meanwhile, seems" Matt" caused quite the ruckus if just him being alive is such a threat.
Still, we met him at last and, he seems quite, unhinged, and powerful, and more obsessed about Leena then Collen was, that CAN"T be good.
Well, the stakes have been raised even higher, this looks like its going to get even more tragic, we will see but, nice introduction to the long hyped brother, we will see how this reunion ends but till then nice fighting and drama again, keep up the great work and till next time.
| Darth Zannacross chapter 8 . 9/3
At last, the long awaited reunion, could have gotten better, could have gone worst, at least her father did not want to turn her to a living doll or some Doomsday key for a fourth impact lol. Seems like he is a anti social guy but not evil, not yet at least, still has better people skills then Sheldon from Big Bang Theory lol.
Still, finding out your brother is a cross between Groot and that Titan in Final Fantasy 13 is a bitter truth to swallow. If her father is not evil , might be a tad, careless or to focused, oy.
Still, seems Sophia has even more darkness in her heart then expected, hope Darth Sidious or Obito or Xehanort are not around lol. Well, not sure if Seth is still around or not but, seems like this can lead to trouble if such issues are not worked out soon.
Well, someone is causing trouble at least, this Harmony is not acting very Harmony like and, specter from the past? Seth? Guess we will see, still, does not bold well. Seems Sophia is being manipulated by someone, at least Mia is showing some nice growth by calming down Sophia just in time for more trouble.
Also finds out Brick is related to Xion, and Xion trained with Saito from Kenshin to weld a Zanbato, this can't end well.
Still, cool to learn more about the inner details about stuff like how the Darkness Zone worked.
However, this ambush is making things dire rather fast, and, Sophie really is turning full traitor , ugh, this is Felicia all over again, we will see.
Well, another intense chapter with intense action and drama, keep up the great work.
| Darth Zannacross chapter 7 . 9/2
So Ash really won, damn, and meanwhile Leena was rather reckless but, it pulled off this time.
Meanwhile Axel and the others are in a bind as Brick and Not Thor are both rather stubborn roadblocks, lol, at least the cast shares my view on the Thor likeness.
Well, seems teamwork was able to prevail, but James seems like a killjoy, or maybe he just wants to kill Quinton, either way, can't catch a break it seems.
Meanwhile, Earnest is a odd name for the " Lord of Plasma", makes me wonder just how earnest he is lol. Well, since he is in favor of genocide , sounds rather sadistically earnest, I mean I do suppose the earth is overpopulated at times but, still don't trust just what this guy has planned. On top of the fact that Leia is with him, yah he is going to be the main bad guy eh? Pull a Aizen or something? We will see.
Well, James is quite the elitist, glad Axel proved him wrong, his AS is rather badass to, glad he got a good deal for having his mind messed up with for so long. At least Leena's hard work paid off and she can meet her father, hopefully its not a bitter reunion.
And, Xion!? Does this mean Xemnas is going to show up? Lol, not the same one I guess, lets hope this Xion has a more stably personalty lol. Well, they all passed the tests, lets see how the real madness goes so, nice conclusion to the arc, keep up the great work and till next time.
| Darth Zannacross chapter 6 . 9/2
Another reminded that most of theses gods were just random teenagers, was the one in charge really Zordon? Lol, well, nice to see Ace and Lee's interaction.
Still, I thought Ace was hopelessly stubborn about Ash but he REALLY does not learn, even goku is less thickheaded, damn, that's the kind of power one of the top brass has, Ace seems keen on learning the hard way, I do wonder what Jeska has planned for him, how to make him not be a tool? Guess we will find out.
Well, I seen plenty of stories with tough training sessions but this does seem like being thrown in to the wolves more or less, at least its not in a environment with 20 times earth's gravity, not yet at least lol.
So, this turned in to a grudge match between brothers, hopefully it does not get quite as bitter as Sasuke VS Itachi or Solid Snake VS Liquid Snake lol, we will see.
Meanwhile, did not expect Hercules to join the melee, even if its not quite the one that was expected, damn bugs, lol.
Well, the duel between brothers was intense but I did not think Ash would be pushed far enough to get his own Digimon, er, soul, I have to admit I think of the King Boomer from Mario on hearing it but, I guess it gets the job done lol, did not think Adrian would go down that easy, oh well, Ash has made some progress, unless his brother is going to pull out something killer next chapter lol.
Well, we will see, till then keep up the great work, another round of nice drama and action.
| Darth Zannacross chapter 5 . 8/31
The lord of all light is named Lee eh? Rock Lee would be so happy lol. Well, time for a truck ton of new characters, this feels like having to learn all the Bleach Captains and their staff at once lol.
So, Scott/ The Emperor is not the one in charge but this Domino? Thought they would be the same person, guess not. Well, gives me a Bleach senior captain Yamaoto vibe of being a killjoy but I suppose that's what being a leader does to people
So, the so called gods can't even get the job done with the environment eh? Not looking quite so Divine, Storm from the X men could get the job done by her self lol.
On top of that, it seems quite dysfunctional at the moment, I can see why the title is what it is lol.
Well, Axel, Sophia and Leena are all making progress on there ambitions I guess, we will see what comes from it. On top of that, Ace is still causing trouble, he is nearly Bowser at this rate lol. Well, we will see what Lee's true agenda is I guess, nice set up for the storm to come I suppose, till next time.
| Darth Zannacross chapter 4 . 8/29
Well, Ace's brother leaves quite a strong impression, with impressive powers to boot. Still, his callousness allowed Ace to get away and he does not seem to have much love for his brother.
Meanwhile, the cops showed they are no longer cannon folder, good for them lol.
Well, we see a castle in god's realm, its rather godly all right, nearly right out of Castlevaina, with a armory to boot, curious to see who had to make all of that stuff lol.
And now their is Tammy, seems, moody for someone of such power, we will see. And we also got some nice reunions with Brick and Gaff, glad they are doing well.
So, chat with the Gods, time to see what all the fuss is about, we will see but, nice setting the stage.
| Darth Zannacross chapter 3 . 8/28
And we are reintroduced to Ash, playing FF 13 2, I see he enjoys suffering lol. Well, Sophia shows she still loves being a jerk, at least Ash has mostly rebound from the fiasco that was Felicia it seems.
Also glad to see Axel is doing well, and he let Leena in on what Dom told him, more questions that need answering lol. Even Austin has improved a tad, though, now that section might be opened to some juicy developments, along with another ominous player.
Ah, to bad Roy and Alexis are not around, er, and Justine to, and yet the coppers are going? Hopefully they don't make the situation worst.
Well, to top it off, Ace is alive? He really is like Team Rocket of the story, or maybe Bowser lol.
Still, talk about twist ending, Ash's brother returns? Hope he does not go by the same logic of Itachi, we will see. Things are heating up, another great chapter and till next time.
| Darth Zannacross chapter 2 . 8/27
Well, the second interloper seems quite vicious indeed, thankfully not Thor, er, Ulric made a surprise return, did not think he would be coming back any time soon. Still, this Shaendru seems quite formidable, we will see if he reaches Seth's level of nastiness soon I guess but, he is making a good debut.
Well, Leah is still being quite brutal and clearly has a grudge, but Mia's grand return cuts down on revenge gal's vengeance it seems, glad to see Mia is less crazy or things would be even worst lol.
Glad Mia forced the bad guys to retreat, its like a ironic view of how the previous story started. I see Levy is still the same, at times he reminds me of the pizza guy from Futerama lol.
On top of that reunion we got another one with Valor, with the good news that Leena can at last get what she wanted after all this time, the entrance to the realm of the gods, Seth would be so envious lol.
Well, Leena's father sounds more and more like a jerk, just hope he is not a Relius or Gendo kind of father, that would suck
Though, speaking of fathers, never expected Valor to have a living dad, and for it to turn out to be Not Thor, well done at least, never thought Ulric would be linked like that.
Well, glad Alex is doing well at least, and as the gang tries to get the band back together, as we see just how the Emperor has been plotting his grand game, on top of that it seems we have a rouge god, this can't end well.
Well, the stage has been and its quite a epic set so nice job with another dose of epic action and drama, looking forward to how things go from here so till then keep up the great work.
| Cy chapter 50 . 8/27
Such an intense chapter. So many deaths with even the mighty Ulric Garinator falling. And then that ending... The next chapter is going to be nuts.
| Darth Zannacross chapter 1 . 8/25
And so, long time no see, been so long since, a few days ago lol. Ah well, things start off nice and cheerful with a prison break it seems, getting Spiderman vibes, I wonder if they were busted out by the Kingpin? Lol, unlikely but we will see, still, Ace never learns it seems even after all this.
Oh well, in the end the Element Lords decide to crash the party, and I was wondering where Valor was lol.
So, in the end, Ace and co all met there ends, guess no final grudge match after all, damn, and not even sure who got the kill in, reminds me of the Transformers movie where they killed off half the cast for new bots to take the spotlight lol.
Still, three years have passed, more then the two required to get in? I wonder what is causing Leena the delay, we will see. In the meanwhile, reunions ahoy, nice to see Sophia catch up, still, no using social media? That's just being callus lol.
Valor's Father eh? Forget at times theses guys are not quite godly at times, should be interesting.
Well, we start off the story with a new angry broad it seems, a female fatale who, fights like Maka from Soul Eater? Well, she seems to be linked to what Dom and Axel were talking about last time, seems this is going too escalate to top level intensity rather soon, with Leah being able to put Yoshino on the ropes , quite the cliff hanger.
Well, a epic start full of action and drama to part two so well done, keep up the great work and till next time.
| Jester chapter 49 . 8/5
I liked seeing that a lot of characters have strong conviction. In particular, Nadine showed that, through both her words and her feet. It's unfortunate that the other characters can't carry that, thanks to the sight of their dearly departed. It'd be pretty amazing if Quinton were the one to make them come to their senses. This could be one of those cases where not having a strong attachment could come in handy.
Slade's a dirty player, but I haven't forgotten that the secret to his hocus pocus mind tricks is all in the wrist. Or rather, what's on his wrist. What a joke. That clown should be lynched. Or is that what he wants...? He's the kind of guy I imagine would have a contingency plan for his contingency plan.
Such language in this chapter. Captain America wouldn't approve, but it's a good indication that things are getting more and more serious.