Reviews for Moments Alone
KM Mazzaferri chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
I really like the end-stopped lines. It slows the poem down and paces it out nicely, and since the poem is about slowing down and noticing things; the end-stopped pattern helps re-enforce that notion. I think the two lines "And toddlers/And air-con." could be combined into one line since they are both really short, the shortest of the whole poem.
Hopeful-Future chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
This is very cute. I had to reread it to understand it because I did a double take when I read "Life is not to be lived but to be observed". But as much as we say 'live life! don't sit by! LIVE' there are times that call for us to just sit and watch.