Wow I am like more confused than ever! Who is Becky? I don't think it's kaylie although I had an inkling but I'm not so sure hmmmm... I need the next chapter!

Oh. My. Goodness! Wonderful chapter! Right as I was finally getting annoyed by Kaylie and how mean she was being to Alicia, Jayce appeared (from where, I wonder?) and then things got really interesting. Slapping, Becky's phone, the video, Jeffrey being ALIVE. Just... Wow. Jaw dropping, especially the video. I want to know so much more. Keep up the great work! I'm really looking forward to your next update.

Oh my god, you've really spun me a loop here, I am unbelievably confused! Gah! Runs to next chapter!

Haven't read this story in ages, but I decided I wanted to carry on where I left off, and I'm so glad I have! Loved the song and it was interesting to see where the title came from :)

Wow, I love Jayce! He is a great character! Definitely didn't expect him to be so psychotic. He's a complete genius, it's great. On to the next chapter, yay!

Yay, the big kidnapping chapter! Excited in seeing how this will work out.

.-. So short, yet, still so amazing ok bby please update soon or imma cry

The 'on a bus' bit was kind of..odd. wouldn't she have tried to sogn for help? Or something?

Awesome! I love it.

Cool. Not as funny as I thought it would be, what with the mention of a salad in the summary but I like it. Onwards I go!

Interesting! Will have to keep reading.

You BEST update, ya hear me?

:O

Wow, this chapter's pretty crazy and the characters are crazy too

I liked this very much. Great grammar and spelling, brilliant plot, and simply awesome characterisation. I thank you for sharing this with us. Cheers.