Reviews for The Mute and The Liar
TMSantos chapter 27 . 9/20/2014
it's almost over? waht wow I cannot believe it... :/ dunno whether to feel sad/happy haha
Lena chapter 27 . 9/19/2014
Hey, it's Welcome to the Carnival :) I think you changed the chapters a bit because it says I've already reviewed this, so I'll just review as a guest.
This is an incredible chapter. I love how the story has unraveled, and how well you managed to resolve it. I really can't wait to read the last chapter, I'm sure it will be amazing. :)
Pinkbeca chapter 26 . 9/18/2014
Why did you stop it there! This is so annoying. I really want the next chapter now, so pretty please update soon :)
CaityLightning chapter 26 . 9/13/2014
This chapter is astounding!

Absolutely wonderful that the mystery is being solved!

Update soon, I am anxious to know if she will shoot him . . . a part of me wants her to, but the other part of me is saying that she won't because she wants him to suffer and live through the uncare that he showed her whilst growing up. If that makes sense . . .

Anyways, update soon! I love your story!
random chapter 26 . 9/12/2014
If this is the last chapter-which I doubt-I will be extremely irritated.
We Used To Wait chapter 26 . 9/12/2014
So first off, thanks for writing that really long summary for me! It helped so much, and I wanted to read it before I reviewed. Now that everything's coming back to me, I realize that there are many ends to be tied up. We finally found out why she doesn't like her father... Although, I always wondered how someone rescinded their love for someone else just because that someone stopped caring about them.

Are we going to get a background on the mother's depression? I think that would add bit of depth to the plot. Mainly because I can't imagine how someone's depression wouldn't also affect other family members. Of course the suicide affected them, but I'd feel like it comes out of nowhere without acknowledgement of that mama's problems. Does this make any sense, btw?

Oh, and that she eats pasta a lot for some reason. I forgot why, although that may have been addressed before. Also, she does eat other stuff, right? Lol, I don't think someone can survive on pasta alone.

As for her father... hmm. I think if the readers were given some clue or hint at the fact that her father was unstable or manipulative (behavior-wise) in some way then it would come across as more authentic/believable. I think because her mother's depression wasn't explained, nor were we hinted at her father's instability or his acting in any way, that it all just came out of nowhere. Maybe that's just me, though? Feel free to disagree.

That last chapter, though... really suspenseful! And this plot was so original... I wish more characters on fp had interesting hobbies like this main character.

I think I had other things to say. But I've forgotten... maybe next chappie.

You have a nice one. ;)
coldwinter12 chapter 25 . 9/11/2014
Omg. You're story has legit been a whirlwind. I can't believe that her father was behind this thr whole time! Please update soon!
Ishotthealbatross chapter 25 . 9/8/2014
Oh my gosh I can't believe this! Pls update soon, I'm dying!
Guest chapter 9 . 9/7/2014
I feel bad for kitty. :(
What's wrong with Alicia? Is this kinda...psychological? Anyway, so long they are human...
I have always loved mysteries though this one is unique. Well, onto next chappie.
rozalicious678 chapter 28 . 9/6/2014
Oooooooo! Gets interesting!
Plus, who is she gonna end up with?
Cant wait! Update SOON!
zaini chapter 28 . 9/5/2014
I've been waiting for an update since early June.
can't imagine how tormented would have been readers hanging since April.
you forgot?! I'm happy that you've got a life ...
But I'm over the moon knowing you're done with this story!
anticipating speedy updates now.

glad you're back.
MaidInFrance chapter 27 . 8/16/2014
I think Kaylie could actually be a nice person underneath all that jealousy and insecurity.
And sidenote-you explained who Cathy is and her situation, but did not explain why she looks makes no sense that she would be, if Kaylie takes care of her the majority of the time.
Leslie chapter 27 . 7/1/2014
Pls update soon! Your story is really amazing :-)
AngelTripathi chapter 27 . 6/21/2014

It's soo damn intriguing!

Please update soon!

It took me 1 hour to read the whole story at one go! And I abso - Bloody - lutely love it!

so, pleasssssseeeeee update!

Pretty please.

Also, I THINK that Jayce DO have feelings for Alicia!
saraaa chapter 27 . 6/9/2014
omg update fast.
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