This is so great, it had me pulled in from the first chapter. Can't wait for more.

Wow, i loved this chapter... You are a brilliant writer x Update soon please x

Ah I love it Iove it I love it!. Seriously this story just gets

more and more interesting. I can't wait till Thursday .

I officially can wait till thursday now! :) x

Was looking for an update for partners in crime and found this and i have to say so far i love the idea x

Good job i loved it from the beginning! Keep writing and ill keep reading! :{D

Excellent story :), only thing is I found it rather monotonous at the start reading one case after another without a break but that's possibly because I just got home from school. Hope to hear more soon cause this is amazing xD!

Wow wow wow! :D Where do I begin? Ok, I was a little unsure at first, because it was going a bit slowly and seemed a little rambley. But that ending! Oh my gosh you actually have to keep writing this! :D and I love the main character. She's so cyncical and negative, but has this really unique, almost obssessive way of thinking and acting, like how she always eats the pasta in 7 forkfuls, and her perfect world is a world with no lies. Update soon! :D

It's great that your writing another book! I hope you continue with partners in crime too :) this is such a good first chapter! I love all the cases and the way she solves them. She sounds so confident in her abilities, you know, always saying "I was right" when the case has been solved :p u definitely have another reader! :D

another great chapter! I really hope you continue writing. I know it's only the first real chapter, but I already love the guy. Why does he have a lampshade in his bag? :L I reckon he stole all those items. :p keep writin! :D

Yay, ur writin another story :) this one sounds amazing! I reali want to find out more about the main character. it was also very clever thecway every case she solves at the beginning had somethin to do with lying.

i enjoyed this, and really hope you continue. I would say there are some lengthy paragraphs which could be shortened down, and you need to be careful to make the crimes sound realistic (although you've done this fine so far, it's just something to watch out for the future) This story is starting off slowly, but that's okay just to introduce the way she thinks. I think the way you have used mainly shorter, basic sentences does work for the character. Alicia is quite a complex character, and although it's still early, this plot is already looking unique and interesting.

This is really good! I actually really like the character, and I'm usually very critical of them. Her idea of a perfect world, you know, with the people walking around with blindfolds around their mouths, is actually pretty creepy. I wonder why she doesn't talk. There is a reason, right? Wow, I really like this and I hope you continue! Update soon! :D x

i really like this story :) hope you continue