i really love your first chapter - you didn't introduce too much information about the fae to make it confusing and take away from the plot, which was good. i love the characterisation, too, and showing the differences between the regular fae and the king.
Miley Deloy

I loved Tithe. And you've done a pretty good job depicting the cruelty of the fey. I love the first chapter. It is well written. Not too fluffy and straight to the point. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to your next chapters!

-MK