Reviews for Apathy
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 43 . 6/12/2014
Wonderful story! I was hooked clear through! I loved your characters and how you described everything! Between Charlotte and Liam, I can't decide which one is my favourite. Great villian! I was surprised who the villain was, I don't know if anyone else was. I liked the ending a lot and now I'm off to read the next one!
Guest chapter 43 . 5/31/2014
this is good is this a published book
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 13 . 5/27/2014
I must say that I am in love with this story! I love your characters and this world you have created! I can't wait to read to the rest!
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
This is a really good first chapter-one of the best that I've read in a long time! I was hooked within the first couple of paragraphs. I am already in love with your very creative plot line and real characters. I can't wait to read more!
Leylana Pademi chapter 43 . 3/22/2014
I love this.
All I can say is that I love this story.
I found Divergent boring because the girl was annoying and kinda whiny. But, this, this is amazing. The girl actually is a normal person. She is someone relatable for me. And it does help that Liam is quite the eye-candy, good sir. :D
This is an excellent story and I hop you continue writing as wonderfully as you have.
Do me a little favor-go and check out my story, Astraea's War? Pretty please? :D
Wind19 chapter 8 . 11/10/2013
Ties to safe guarantEE. Watch subject-verb agreement!
FyreBird chapter 43 . 7/11/2013
Amazing work on the story. It's really interesting and even with all the science stuff, it does not bore me. I have a hunch that the wanderer was Charlotte's mother before she died. Good luck with your next story.
Guest chapter 43 . 5/26/2013
They didn't even kiss. Whaaa? Loved this. Moving on to the sequel! 3
The Undecisive Thinker chapter 2 . 5/23/2013
I like the story so far. It really reminds me of Delirium by Lauren Oliver . Have you read the series? If not, you should. It's essentially about the same concept: no one's allowed to love and yada yada.
Good job!
Mazarine chapter 43 . 12/29/2012
beautiful first ending :) I can't wait for the next book
ShannonRGilstrap chapter 43 . 12/29/2012
Your book is amazing! When it becomes published, people all over the world will run out and buy it. :) I wish you luck...and I hope you continuing sharing your stories!
ANH chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
I have only read the first chapter of this story, and just let me say, I absolutely loved it. The way you describe things is amazing and it puts a very vivid picture in my head. Needless to say, I plan on reading the rest of this and then the sequel as well. Keep on doing whatever it is you do, because it definitely works.
Ophelia Schmit chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
Great story! I liked it so far!

Naomi Chick chapter 43 . 12/20/2012
A beautiful and sad ending. The emotions help deliver the dramatic structure as the story closes. This chapter reminded of Never Say Never by The Fray. Charlotte tells she love him despite her words being cut off upon her and Liam capture. I really hope you update the sequel soon.
Jennywrites chapter 43 . 12/19/2012
OH. MY. GOD. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Nonononono I can't believe it's over. I cried. I'm not kidding, I really cried at the ending, and at the fact that this amazing story is over. I love and hate the ending. It's a really dramatic and epic way to end it, you are such a talented author. I just hated the fact that she didn't get to finish saying "I love you". It's so tragic. This whole chapter was wonderful. I have absolutely nothing bad to say about it. Heck, I have nothing bad to says about the whole story. I have no doubt that it would be a best-seller if you were to get it published. I know I would buy it. Never stop writing, you are so gifted.
It keeps hitting me that it's actually over. I have to say that this is right up there with Harry Potter in terms of my favourite books. These past few months I've been a little depressed, but your story always cheered me up when I got an update alert. I can't wait for the sequel!
Have a great holidays, and thank you again for writing such an awesome story.
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