Oooo can't wait till they get together

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Oh I love this chapter! I like the connections with the metaphors of caterpillar and butterflies. The purge arrives at liam is back to business now and ready to interrogate his mother. I like how you showed that his does care about her and his anger that she committed a crime while he was struggling before being administered the purge. Nice dynamic! I love it!

This is very intense! I love Liam's struggle to remain emotionless. You have created two interesting characters. So far, I enjoyed reading Charlotte's life as a person off of the Purge and i love the contrast between her and Liam, who's dedicated to the Purge. Fabulous!

Yay! I was right! It was Liam that she saw! I like the mutual attraction between the two of them, although neither one of them really knows what it means. I'm guessing the two of them are the romance part of your story's genre that I noticed. But where's the supernatural part? Not that it really matters because this story is amazing! I'm fully immersed into the world of Paradise now! I love how the Purge is wearing off and Liam and Sophia have to struggle to keep their emotions in check! Fabulous!

A chapter which explains things so not the most interesting one. Waiting for some more action :D

I Like :) This alternate/future-verse is intrigueing, and considering the way the world is going nowadays, I have no trouble accepting this reality you have created. Good style of writing, good grammar, good style, unique idea.

Wow she really got beaten up, so are her father and sister both off the purge too?

Brilliant! I am really enjoying this! Who is this guy Charlotte notices on the monorail? Could it be Liam? The purple-haired girl intrigues me and I wonder about her role in all of this. I wonder what the Free Spirits could be? Is it Charlotte's gang of followers, who aren't really her gang because she doesn't know much about them? Hmm. I guess I have to keep reading and find out.

Charlotte is very clever and determined to stay off the Purge! Another great entry into this story. I'm not a huge fan of history either so I can relate with Charlotte. I enjoy reading books where I can relate to at least one of the characters. Charlotte reminds me of myself in a way. She asks the way I probably would if society was addicted to the Purge and everyone else's emotions were suppressed. I absolutely love the silent, unintentional rebellion with her clothing, but I have to wonder why colorful clothes are allowed if emotions are suppressed? It's very early in this story, so I 'm sure I'll find out the answer to that question soon. You are a great writer, teasing readers with a just a little bit of your story at a time. It's great and I'm anxious to see how everything plays out.

I am new to Fictionpress but I have to say this is probably the best story I have read on this sight. Charlotte is a very interesting character. I am curious to learn more about the music playing inside her head. I like how she has a bit of a sense of humor despite the dark undertones of the novel as a whole. Great start! I dont know of your intentions with this but I expect to see it in bookstores really soon!

Wow! What an interesting story! Please update!

It felt like in the first part of the chapter Liam was in denial. He tried to tell hinself that the fact of his mother being a rebel meant nothing to him which it should be but I don't really think is. Anyway imteresting chapter, waiting for more.

That was another good chapter. It was well written, I don't believe I encountered any spelling or grammar errors. The ending was pretty good I thought, dark and foreboding. And we hear about this Project Lightning. I look forward to seeing where this goes, keep up the good writing.

Wow that was intense, but what ever happened at the mating clinic?

Another great chapter! The broken relationship between parent and child is so sad and heartbreaking, but at the same time, it's real and happens all the time. I don't know if that was the effect you were going for, but I like it!