The past few chapters have been interesting ones. We get the alternate perspective of the Liam and get to see him on the verge of expressing emotion before it's all wiped away at the Purge. And now we have this mission of Charlotte's. I have to say, this chapter did provoke some nervousness from me, it was well written. I don't believe I've encountered spelling or grammar errors in the past few chapters, but I am fairly certain there were none in this chapter. Keep up the good writing, I look forward to reading what happens next.

heeey this is Andrak i really enjoy your story. love liam. keep a lookout for my stories.

I love everything about this story. It reminds me of the movie Equilibrium which is also about an emotionless world. But your story and the movie are completely different and your story is very unique. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more :)

Wow I loved the descriptions in this, the Purge is interesting and cool. Update soon please

I really like your story so far! Although, you may want to give clarifications for those who think "why?" when they read that it is illegal to have emotions. I know I am wondering why it became illegal. Did it have something to do with the war the Charlotte's teacher was talking about, or is it something completely different?

The fight to control his emotions was so tense, nice work. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Liam's perspective contrasts so well with Charlotte's, I love it. And gah, the chapter's ending, now I have to read more! :D

Wow, I'm really liking this story so far. Your writing style is great. I can't wait to see how the rebel movement pans out, I'll be sure to read more.

Your idea of having people with no emotions is really cool and i'm happy to have found this story and am eagerly waiting for the new chapters.

This is really good!

I like your writing style, it is descriptive with out adding distractions...

I can't help but notice that the plot in this story is very similar to the plot of Equilibrum, but I think your characters have a lot more depth... :)

I don't have a fiction press account so if you want to contact me about this review I am kamai6 on fanfiction (not the same quality I know...)

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wow. that war unexpantly captivating, good job

This story is so far well written. I didn't encounter any spelling or grammar errors in this chapter. In this chapter we get the sad part of him having to be there to go arrest his sister. It's interesting to see how he is starting to feel emotions, it'll be intriguing to see how far it goes. Overall it's an interesting story. The plot is a scary concept, but it's interesting. I look forward to seeing how you continue this story. Keep up the good writing.

Wow, I really like these kinds of stories. I'm really liking what I'm reading so far.

What an interesting plot! At first, I wasn't sure if I would've liked the whole zero-emotion environment your story takes place in but it's actually quite good! Your main character seems like a lively, witty sort of person which is great for me because I tend to get really irritated by characters I find irritating :-/

Anyway, I'll be reading the next chap. soon

I've got to say, I have a soft spot for this kind of story- the futuristic totalitarian state, which abuses its power to control its citizens, and the attempts to resist such complete control. Charlotte's an interesting character as well, her being unaligned but still a part of the resistance- even if she's not as active about it as some of the others.

The control of emotions is an interesting way to go about it. That means of control isn't as often used in fiction, that I'm aware, but I like how it might go. Really, this story is starting to feel like an extended allegory, and as such, I'm very curious about where it's going to go.

The only real complaints I have are in terms of details. For example, the Secret Police having a well-known uniform makes me raise an eyebrow, and I find the allowance of bright colors to be a bit incongruous- if the state isn't allowing emotions, surely it would demolish anything which might engender them, like envy over brighter colors or lust over more revealing outfits? Just things to think about.

That being said, this is an interesting story, and I'll look forward to the next chapter. :)