Amazing amazing chapter! I love the ending! It's funny how it's a cliffie but at the same time it isn't. I can't wait for the new story! I hope you post soon!
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx

That was a brilliant ending. I love and the idea of this story is amazing. Please return soon with the second story. i can't wait.

I can feel the tension between the characters. Love how Charlotte called Lilly a bitch. Classic. Oh gosh, I hate the outcome is appearing for Liam and Charlotte. I can't wait until the epic conclusion.

I can't get over how awesome this story is. I'm going to be REALLY depressed when it's over.

Great chapter, but GOD, Lilly's a massive bitch! Looking forward to the next update :D

Amazing chapter! Even though we already knew the information that she told them here, it was interesting to see it from his POV. Didn't she back up the information in her wrist? ... gosh that sounds wierd! I can't wait for the nex chapter!
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx

Why does Charlotte go through the trap door? A sign is screaming danger. I love the suspense as the story is almost finish. I just know the last chapter is epic as the characters come into place.

Aaaarghh! Cliffhanger and a half! I really don't like Lilly at the moment! I love Liam though, but who doesn't love Liam, right? Brilliant chapter, I am looking forward to the next one!

DUN DUN DUNNNNN! The ending of this chapter is so epic it deserves sound effects.

Amazing chapter! You always have to leave things on a cliffie, don't you? XD I can't wait to see what happens next!
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx

Oh my, I love how it turns out!
Please post the next chapter, I can't wait!
Your writing is exceptionally good and I love how you lay out the whole story!
Well done and I'm looking forward to the next chapters and books and so! :)

Awesome chapter. All the pieces are coming together. Lily play her characters well to lead both party on. I just hope Charlotte realize the complicated situation that involve everyone.

I don't like Lilly anymore! Stupid bitch... But I love Liam still, and his devotion to Charlotte! I loved this chapter, and I cannot wait for the next one :D

I knew Lilly was eeeeeeeevil. Got pretty excited when I was right. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm going to be so depressed when this is finished.

Amazing chapter! It sorta all makde sense now! I wonder what she was talking about to Liam? I guess we'll find out soon. Why do I have the feeling that this story will be left on a huge cliffie?
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx