Reviews for Apathy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. Please continue. |
![]() ![]() 200! yay congrats! amazing chap almost to 40 chaps! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I swear my mouth just hung open the whole time I read this chapter. It's getting really good. I love the part at the end about being a hero. I know the story is close to the end too, so I hope you don't leave us waiting for the sequel for too long. I hate waiting for sequels, especially after cliff hanger endings. And I know this will have a cliff hanger ending, because all great authors like to torture their readers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The corruption with Paradise has finally been reveal to Charlotte. That was a lot information to digest. I can't believe everyone simply a pawn used in someone twisted experiment. It's crazy a lot people have suffer just to get result without realizing the impact. Overall, I really love this story and I can't wait until the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No Liam in this chapter but god that was a lot of information! So they're all just experiments? That's depressing. And Aidan used to be part of the Amber Army! Weird! Loved this chapter, looking forward to the next one. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing chapter! It's funny that she doesn't even think about the people who are after her and the fact that they're probably quite close to where she is. Keep up the amazing work! :) (: Tarah xXx |
![]() ![]() ![]() O.O WHAT THE HECK HAPPENED! Lilly was so sweet ;( good fake out update soon xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god. I'm so confused. Is Lilly really on the White Agency's side or SAFE's side? I get that she's a double agent, I guessed she was the spy a while ago, but its still confusing. The mind control thing is weird too. I hope Charlotte is okay, she's kinda stuck now that Liam is gone. I also love how much Charlotte and Liam care for each other now. You're characters are so complex, it really draws the reader in and makes them care for the characters. You are an excellent author. Keep it up. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very surprising twist. I love the outcome of the story with Liam now being a suspect like Charlotte. I'm very surprise to find Lily is a double agent. I hope Charlotte will get the information she need before the cops swarm the place. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing chapter! I love how much technology they have! I wonder what she just did and how she did it... I forget if you already said it somewhere... Keep up the amazing work! :) (: Tarah xXx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant chapter! Liam is fantastic, I love him! Looking forward to the next chapter :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing amazing story so far! What interested me about it at first was that it was nice and long, but I'm glad I read it! I can't wait for you to update! Keep up the amazing work! :) (: Tarah xXx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooooooooh its getting so good. I want to know what they'll find at BioLife, but I REALLY want Liam to finally quit the Purge. Can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks for updating so quickly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nooo! Poor Liam! I hope he doesn't take it out on Charlotte! I love purge free Liam, he's so cute and adorable and well, just perfect. I would steal him, but that would ruin the Charlotte/Liam romance! Looking forward to the next update! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this chapter. Finally, Liam begin to reveal his emotions to Charlotte. I like the way he become sincere about Charlotte's situation which explain so much about her personality. I'm glad the music thing was explain. I never would've believe she had a music player inside her head. But, I can't believe her father had experiment on her. Somehow, she manage to forgive her father since that is the hardest part. |