lol you said long chapter like it was a bad thing ;) cool chapters good update :D AND A KISS thumbs up xD

... I don't even have words to describe that chapter. Definitely my favourite so far. I love Charlotte and Liam. Just...wow.
I'm also really happy that you're updating more frequently. I literally freak out every time I get an update alert for this story. It just brightens my day. Thank you for writing such an awesome story and please don't stop updating. I need to know what happens next!

Yay! Charlotte and Liam time! They are just so adorable together. I have to admit, I'm getting a tad worried as to how Scarlett is going to fit into this... Though I suppose it was probably just a crush she had on Liam. And now we know all about Charlotte's experiment. Kinda creepy I suppose but no more creepy than an emotionless society. I really hope Liam doesn't go all strange once he is back on the purge. He's too adorable for that! As you can probably assume from this rambling review, I absolutely loved this chapter! It was most definitely brilliant :D. I cannot wait until the next update!

Aargh! Liam is still unconscious! I cannot wait until he wakes up and flashes his pretty eyes :)
I loved this chapter, and I can't wait to read more. Plus, we learnt that not everywhere in the world is a freaky dictatorship, which is always comforting! Looking forward to your next update! :)

lol the chapters pass by so quickly lol BECAUSE THEY ARE SO GOOD I feel like a four year old but I have an ongoing cued with punctuation so forgive me xD great chapters no mistakes and I tottally forgot Adrain was black xD thumbs up!

Nooooo. Why must you keep us in suspense? Still, you were right about this being a pivotal point in the story. Also, I am freaking out right now over the fact that Liam's name is actually William, because I absolutely adore that name. It's the name of my favourite book character of all time (William Herondale from the Infernal Devices series by Cassandra Clare). I also love Liam, so it must be a sign, lol. Anyway, please please please update soon. I'm begging you.

Thank you for this wonderful piece of fiction Mr Gilstrap. I read the entire thing and I cannot wait to read the rest of it. You seem to be a very talanted writer and I shall be waiting to read more of your work.

-Rucilia

Yay! Yay yay yay! Finally! Very very exciting :). I love Liam and cannot wait for the next update :D

Very interesting story, its different then anything I've read. Well done!

Awesome chapter :D. Absolutely brilliant. I'm glad Aidan got away. Charlotte caring for Liam is just perfect :D

Once again, I love this story. I can't believe everything that happen so far. Though, I figure that'd explain the bad instincts Charlotte had from the last chapter. The suspense of the Zeppelins gave a nice effect when the Grid was silenced.

Aaarghh! Cliffhanger much?! I cannot wait for the next chapter, this story is brilliant!

O_o The ending. Why? Why must there be an epic cliffhanger ending in this chapter? I really want to read more. The suspense is already killing me.

great chapters. xD only 12 left :o lol LOVE this! update when you can hopefully SDUPER QUICK

This just keeps getting better! Serioulsy, I just hate 'romance' stories where the charachers fall in love in like 5 chapters. This is just perfect! Please update soon :)