Reviews for Apathy
Tezzah chapter 31 . 11/21/2012
Great chapter, I loved Charlotte's thoughts of Liam :) I really hope you update soon, 'cause I have to know if something has happened to Lilly and how the meeting with Liam at the monorail station will go :D
Naomi Chick chapter 31 . 11/20/2012
I loved when you update. This story always leaves me to wonder about the next outcome. Charlotte reaction toward Liam's shirtless body was priceless. What girl wouldn't go crazy over that? I like how Charlotte is worried about the outcome of her situation and involvement of her friends.
Hayley Jade Alisdair chapter 31 . 11/19/2012
So nerve wracking, but completely and utterly brilliant! Fantastic author! Literally cannot wait for the next update!
Jennywrites chapter 31 . 11/19/2012
I loved Charlotte's reaction at the beginning and about Liam being shirtless. Hilarious. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Jennywrites chapter 30 . 11/16/2012
Oooo so exciting! The character development in this story is great, especially Liam. I'm so excited for the next chapter.
Oh and I'm calling it right now, Lily is definitely the spy.
TheRaven'sFeather chapter 29 . 11/13/2012
Like I have said before, this is quite good. I know Charlotte has good intentions but I can't help but want to bang her head against a wall for wanting to do something so idiotic.
I have a few questions about this.
a)Marriage? Why have it at all? Marriage implies bonds, even if they're arranged. Why not just always have those assigned mating appointments?
b)About the mating appointments. Are they actually 'doing it'? Why not just use in vitro?
c)At the beginning, Liam refers to rebels as 'filth'. This implies that he feels emotions towards them. Is this just because he didn't have the purge yet?
d)How would getting rid of emotions benefit society? How did it reach that point. I doubt if one day a politician announced 'there will be no emotions' that there would be no uproar about it.
Aside from that, this is really well done. I can see that you're putting a lot of effort into this. Good job and keep writing :)
Miles-tails-prowler chapter 29 . 11/13/2012
"This device is only compatible with a certain operating system. A high-tech one at that and very rare like something the government uses."
Hmm. The government uses Linux... It's pretty rare in today's society... and it's very advanced... It must be Linux... XD My laptop can open that drive! Brute force attack if neccesary... XD It would only take 10 000 000 years on a modern laptop to crack the password on something that advanced...
mt chapter 28 . 11/6/2012
Just started reading. Superawesome story! Please, keep updating!
Mazarine chapter 28 . 10/31/2012
your eyes 0.0 MY FAV CHAP Ever! great chapter I hope Abigail gets out ok update soon?
Naomi Chick chapter 28 . 10/30/2012
Great update. I'm starting to notice the way Liam question his duties to save or arrest Charlotte. I agreed with Charlotte's action since she knows the White Agent purpose.
Pixiescale1185 chapter 28 . 10/29/2012
I just wanted to say that I am glad you have come back to this story. I can't remember how i found this story but i think it is brillant and i enjoy reading it. the idea of the purge is a very interesting idea and i love reading this story very much.
Tezzah chapter 27 . 10/22/2012
ARGH! So exciting, I have to read more! :D This is one of my favorite stories, so please update soon :)
Miles-tails-prowler chapter 27 . 9/11/2012
I think he already knows!
Author Leigh Songstad chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
This is very interesting, I definitely have never heard of this concept. I also write first person, present tense and love your descriptions. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
Jennywrites chapter 27 . 9/10/2012
Flawless, as usual.
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