This is a very interesting work you've got here. The world you've made is very well developed, although I would like to lean more about why exactly emotions were banned and how that was allowed. It must be hard to write a character's p.o.v that has no emotion. I am interested to see what will happen next. This reminds me of a story made quite a while ago called Brave New World, perhaps you've heard of it? All in all, good job.

This by far is the best chapter so far! All of the others are really great too but this one is just very impactful. Wow. I almost cried when Charlotte lost the one aspect of her character that make her a unique individual. Now the government has forced her to be like everyone else in every way but knowing her, I believe she'll figure out a way to go against this new law.

Love. I love how that word, that emotion keeps coming back into play in the story. It's the most outlawed emotion but it seems to be the most poignant. Excellent writing. This is just amazing. I can't stop praising this story. That's why I have reviewed every chapter so far because I always find that I have to say something wonderful about this story. Agents, give this guy a book deal now. LOL!

So now we know mostly what happened to Scarlett exactly. Nice backstory there. I really liked that although it was terribly sad. I love how the characters come together from different worlds as you had Ramos and Sophia in that chapter as the arresting officers. This story just get more and more profound with each chapter and I feel really sorry for Charlotte and her family so much that I actually hurt while reading this story. I hope everything works out for her in the end. She deserves after enduring so much in a place with stupid laws. This is very impactful and I hope that our government never does this in real life. It's scary to think about you know?

Wow, the ending of this chapter was amazing. So good. Absolutely wonderful chapter. Please update soon!

That's really powerful.

So well written.

I'm back to read this. I know I've been away for a while on vacation with the family. At any rate, I had to dig back in so here goes . . . Another wonderful entry into the tale of Charlotte and Liam. I love how everything is unfolding. You're not rushing the plot along and you really touch based on the human nature of the two main characters, even though they are so vastly different. And the Amber Army? Wow. I look forward to seeing the role that they play in all of this.

I just thought of something, if Dr. Cato invented the new Purge, is it possible she created it so that the human body would eventually become imune to it?

Awesome chapter! You don't understand how relieved I am that polygamy is not mentioned with Mormon xD. This is so rare! My best friend is Mormon and I am honorary Mormon (I go to camp and mutual- basically a youth group with her. I'm going to mutual tonight xD) So many people just somehow mention polygamy/polygyny when they talk about Mormons xD. Sorry for rambling!t

I love the suspense as Charlotte response towards the officers. When she heard bright color were banned, I felt like she had lost a battle without recovery. It's unbelievable the government held so much to change everything about humans. I hope Charlotte and the others don't give up their fighting.

This is really good! I love the plot line it is like nothing i have read before. How did you come up with such and original idea? Please continue!

JShen

DUN DUN DUN! Another great chapter! Update soon!

oooh the plots thickening!

I absolutely love your story! I can't get over it. And i think liam's hunch is right, there was someone else posing as ava suarez, i had a feeling.

I have meant to review before, truly. Just to close up my ramblings-you have great ideas and i honestly cannot wait to see where you take this, keep it up!

AWESOME STORY! please update soon :D

This story keeps getting better and better. I can't tell you how much I enjoy reading this!