Reviews for Tears
ConverseAllStar chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
So, it is a good poem, and i like the message. I especially like the 'the only water that burns' it's good. Coz?Hm. I don't like that. The other part that I don't exactly think fits, is 'make you look old' To me, it just doesn't fit. If the only reason you put that there was to make it rhyme with 'told', you don't rhyme in all the places, and poetry isn't always supposed to rhyme. Keep writing.